“I am terrified of these rides, not sure I can handle it” said Jo, eyeing the monster “Tora Tora” fearfully.
“This is so much fun, come on lets do it. I love such rides” Emma’s excited voice drowned his fearful one.
Few minutes later, they were seen laughing as the capsule moved higher up. This can be fun, glad I listened to you, said a beaming Jo.
“That went well, I never expected Grandpa Jo to take that ride but looks like our idea of teaming them up worked.”, said Hannah
“You don’t know ย my Granny Emma, she wont take NO for an answer- this arranged date is the beginning of a new journey for them in their sunset of their life, lets see where it leads”
Linking up with the amazing Rochelle Wisoff who hosts FridayFictioneers, a flash fiction challenge. Thanks J Hardy for the picture.
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Chartered Accountant, Story Teller, Dreamer, Voracious Reader, Blogger, Mommy to a little munchkin, Shopaholic, Day Dreamer.Passionate about my career in the corporate world and aspire to break the glass ceiling, at the same time nurture my passion for writing. My niche area is short stories, I also write on parenting, sexism, life's experiences, micro blogs and flash fiction. I have won the best Parenting blog post at mycity4kids.com the largest parenting website in India, 4 times and several of my posts have been published in the #MostPopular category on this site garnering millions of views. I also write on Bonobology, Rivo Kids, Women's Web and Youth Ki Awaaz. My blog has been chosen as the Top Indian Blogs for the years 2018-2019,2020 by TopIndianBlogs website and found a place in the prestigious Top 22 Indian Literary Blogs in 2020 @TopIndianBlogs.
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Sweet story, and nice reveal – good to see some older people enjoying the fun too ๐
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Everyone deserves to have fun, isnโt it?๐
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Hey Akshata! You know what thought passed my mind when I read this story? That you and I would make these cool grandmas a few decades from now…lol. Simple joyful story! Love, Cheers and a Happy 2018 to you and your family! ๐
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Thatโs a super cool thought! ๐
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I wasn’t expecting that! Such a sweet story. Well done.
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Thx a ton Susan
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I enjoyed that story. I like the way you conceal the age of the couple until halfway through the story.
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Thx so much Penny! That was a good observation ๐
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Dear Akshata,
At first I thought they were kids. Love it that they were older and the date was arranged by their children. Sweet story. clever.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ya I intended to reveal that later, glad you liked it. Thx Rochelle
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Sweet story Aks.
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ThxNats!
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Absolutely gorgeous. Well done grandkids!
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Ya thatโs a sweet gesture by the grand kids
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Enjoyed this and hope for a happy ending. Hopefully Grandpa Jo’s heart can take the excitement of a whirl like this. ๐
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Wow, I loved your comment, looks like his heart is on a roll
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Sweet story.
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Thx!
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Love in the twilight? Cute story .
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Age no bar, ๐
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A lovely story about finding love and companionship, age doesn’t matter ๐
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True age is no bar here
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Such a sweet story! How companionship is necessary at that age and I am glad the younger generation made some effort โบ๏ธ
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True companionship is most needed at that stage in life. Thx so much Ramya for reading
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Thoughtful grandkids, lovely story! I wish the couple more happiness in the years ahead.
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Thx so much Moon for reading and sharing your thoughts
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That was wonderful! Love that the younger set up the older (and I bet you could trim those extra 27 words and still make it as wonderful! ๐ )
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Thx Dale!
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Wow thats very beautiful. So a roller coaster put two aged hearts together. Nice. I am scared of such rides and have always kept myself away from them :-).
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Then you havenโt met your Emma yet ๐
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My Emma is scared of roller coasters too ๐๐๐๐๐ค
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That put a smile on my face.
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Thx Lav ๐
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Lovely to read a story that accepts love isn’t just for the young!
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Thx Lizzy love certainly has no limits or barriers
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AWWWWWW ::::smile:::: beautiful ending.
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Thx Dan!
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An elegant story for this prompt.
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