I loved the snow, I could sit by the window for hours staring at the snowflakes as they changed the entire landscape- from green and brown to spotless white. My friends loved the sun and hated winters, they thought I am weird.
Then one day, Jamie broke up with me on a snowy winter night. It was the worst night of my life, I started detesting winters. They reminded me of heartbreak.
5 years later, one winter night, Neil was born. A new memory, life’s most precious moment which I sealed in my heart forever. Winters are special again.
(98 words)
Linking up with Rochelle Wisoff who hosts a weekly flash fiction challenge for aspiring writers. Thanks Dale Rogerson for the picture.
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Chartered Accountant, Story Teller, Dreamer, Voracious Reader, Blogger, Mommy to a little munchkin, Shopaholic, Day Dreamer.Passionate about my career in the corporate world and aspire to break the glass ceiling, at the same time nurture my passion for writing. My niche area is short stories, I also write on parenting, sexism, life's experiences, micro blogs and flash fiction. I have won the best Parenting blog post at mycity4kids.com the largest parenting website in India, 4 times and several of my posts have been published in the #MostPopular category on this site garnering millions of views. I also write on Bonobology, Rivo Kids, Women's Web and Youth Ki Awaaz. My blog has been chosen as the Top Indian Blogs for the years 2018-2019,2020 by TopIndianBlogs website and found a place in the prestigious Top 22 Indian Literary Blogs in 2020 @TopIndianBlogs.
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Such a lovely, heart warming story!
Beautiful!
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Thx so much Moon!
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Hurting and healing realistically written. Lovely story.
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Thx so much for the lovely comments
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Sweet ending, glad she came to love winter again 🙂
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Thx Ian!
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It’s strange how we associate emotions and events. You captured this.
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True Sandra
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And so she went full circle! A delightful tale Akshata.
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Thx a lot Keith!
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Awwe, so sweet. I love happy endings.
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Thx Anurag!
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Beautiful. Atleast the winters would be good for the next 10-15 yrs for sure
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Very true Ravi..why only 10-15?
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The complete attention from the child will be diverted post that age generally. But it could continue beyond that, mine was a general remark
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That’s a fair observation Ravi
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Thanks.
According to a study, on very snowy nights there is 310% more conception than rejection.
Cheers.
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I wasn’t aware thx for sharing that piece of information
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Isn’t it amazing how the same season can bring back such diverse memories.
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True life can take us by surprise sometimes
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Dear Akshata,
Sweet story of the way we associate events with weather or other things. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thx so much dear Roch
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Funny how we do that… a song, weather, a movie…
Lovely take!
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Thx a ton
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Very nice story of events, associations, passing of time, and healing. Well done.
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Thx so mu h Granonine!
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