Now is the time, just do it.
I tried my best to be a good son but I can’t do it anymore. I want to live for myself now, a stress free life, free of hospital visits, medicines, pain and suffering. A life where I do not receive frantic calls and have to leave everything and rush home like a lunatic.
Mom’s kidney issues have become my worst living nightmare. And thats when Vicky lured me to Bombay- the city of dreams. I have been preparing for this day since 1 month.
The last leg will fit in place tonight as I get my certificates and papers from mom’s wardrobe when she is asleep. I sneak in, and stealthily get the keys from under her pillow. As I rummage through the safe, a cold metal hits my hand, there is a secret drawer within the wardrobe, never knew this existed.
I find a file labelled “Confidential”, I open the pages and my eye sockets pop up in horror.
“Baby Rory who suffers from failure of both kidneys is due for transplant in a week, the donor is his mother Mary Francis.”
I looked back at my mother, sleeping peacefully, unaware that her only son to whom she had donated her kidney was about to desert her cos he was sick of caring for her. I fell on my knees and shed silent tears as mother smiled in her sleep.
Linking up with #TellTaleThursday with Anshu & Priya
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Quite a different take. Good one Akshata!!
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Thx Meha!!
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This was quite an unusual story, Akshata! Poor mother and ungrateful son!
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Thx Anshu! Hoping his eyes are open now
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ouch, a warning shot from karma. he’d better the do the right thing or else! nice one akshata
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Thanks Kanika!
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An unusual take, Aks. I have observed that most of your stories subtly send a message across and in no way compromising on the entertainment aspect. Not an easy thing to do.
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That’s very kind of you Pri!
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Good that son came to know that his mother is suffering after donating her kidney to her son. This son was leaving her. Even otherwise, I would think it to be very selfish of a son to desert his ailing mother in distress. If not kidney, she has raised him, stood by him in good and bad times.
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Very true Abhijit! Hopefully he realised his folly
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It’s a relief that he hasn’t lost his conscience fully. There’s still hope left. I echo Priya’s observation regarding your stories. Neat presentation, Akshata. Precise & to the point. 🙂
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Thanks so much Ravish, look forward to your comments as always!
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