12 December, Sunday, 8 am. I let out a ear piercing scream as I kick my way into this world. Imagine passing through that narrow vagina- I wonder why on earth they call it normal.
While everyone talks about how painful it is for the mom, do you think its easy peasy for a tiny baby? Hell no. But I was glad to be out. 10 months of living in darkness, I wonder why they say a baby loves it. Boy I was glad to get a glimpse of the world- the nurses in their pink uniforms, that gynec uncle whose voice I know so well by now, Daddy with his moth wide open who looked like he will faint any moment and the most precious person- My Mommy.
Doesn’t the world look so colourful, gay, bright, full of hope? I, Myra cant wait to grow up and soak in the wonderful experiences the world has to offer.
Only 2.8 kgs, thin hair and too big eyes- I was in for a rude shock when I overheard someone whisper about me. I had just come into this world and the judgement had already begun. They were comparing me to a baby born in the next room- a chubby 3.5 kg he was. I peered enviously.
I dint feel so good now. I wanted my Mumma. But she was sleeping, blissfully unaware of the turmoil I was in. I longed for her warmth, her soothing voice, her touch, her bosom. Perhaps I was too hasty in coming out. Is there a way I can get back into Mummy’s tummy?
And then I hear my Nani say “Snehal was keen to have a boy”, I freeze.
Linking up with #BlogchatterA2ZChallenge -Letter A
My theme for the challenge is
“A slice of life through Myra’s eyes” – a fictional tale of growing up and learning some vital lessons about self love, feminism, sisterhood, a working woman and the essence of being a woman in urban India.
Perfect ending.. Loved the story.
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Thx Deepa! It leads to the continuation of the letter B
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I am also into the atoz challenge. A first timer. I am writing on woman themed at 40. With two months more to slide down the hill, i am sharing my personal experience of how i am coping with 40s. Do give a read if u have time. Thanks.
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Of course Deepa! I recall reading your theme reveal. Will read soon
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Thank you so much aks
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Beautiful beginning. Looking forward to this story. https://trinalooksback.com/2018/04/01/aaji-the-foster-grandmother/
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Thx Balaka hooping on yo yours soon. I loved the theme
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Great start Akshata! I am sure this would be full of hope and positivity.
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Thx so much Meha! It has hope and despair both but some important life lessons 😊. Is your post up?
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Yes, it is up.lets see how i fare. But, started off with a sick child and travel. So, it would be better in the coming days, i hope!
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Oh no, hope the little one gets better soon
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Lovely start. Would love to see a slice of life through Myra’s eyes. All the best, Akshata 🙂
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Hey thanks so much Ravish! So nice to hear from you!
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Waiting for the story to unfold every day… 🙂 it has started amazingly
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Thx Adi will hop on to yours soon!
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A beautiful beginning, Akshata. Looking to the following posts… can’t wait. M glad that once again, we both are writing on womanhood. I love reading your posts around this topic. And, of course, your feedback on mine, no pressure though. 🙂
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So glad to hear that Rashi going to hop over to read yours soon
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Wow, it’s truly beautiful!!
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Thx so much
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Wow Akshata. Great start. Looking forward to Mrya’s journey through the alphabet and life.
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Thanks so much Kanika!
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Great start – are we going to follow her life all the way to the end over the month? Look forward to reading more.
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Yep Ian! More to come as the pages unfold.
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I loved this – such a great take on an event that is usually all from the parents’ point of view. I’m looking forward to where you take us in your life journey over April – and thanks for visiting me too x
Leanne | http://www.crestingthehill.com.au
A for Avoid Negativity
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Glad to have connected Leanne! There is quite a lot in store. Loved your theme too
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Damning and yet honest at the same time. People even compare fetuses so a new born baby being looked down upon isn’t even something far fetched.
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True and the judgement begins.. a never ending journey. The baby will have to harden up- the only way she can face this unscathed
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I would say that having to harden up is a scathing reflection of the world itself
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Cant agree more Arjun- life experiences teach us this.
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That was one nicely crafted story. The emotions of a baby is something none in the world would know nor the baby him/herself. Harsh reality ending tho.
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Thanks Ravi so glad you visited. The ending is an opening for the next story! Its not as bad as it looks, I can tell you that 🙂
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☺👏 am sure it will b good after all ur writing does justice to words and emotions.
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You are very kind!
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That is so heartbreaking though. And it is just the start of all the comparisons Myra will have to face in life. Sad but true. Will be following this series. All the best
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Thx so much Mahak. As you rightly said its the start of so much more she has to endure but my protagonist will have nerves of steel.
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Waiting for the story to unfold through Myra’s eyes. Very interesting end of the post. Coming back for more tomo.
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Thx so much Sonia! So glad to hear this
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Was the granny voicing her own thoughts rather than that of the new mother, I wonder! After a great ordeal, Snehal and the Myra’s father must have been happy …I wish to believe this.
More power to Myra, born tough!
What a powerful start Akshata!
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You may be right, I can’t reveal more Anagha but promise it’s coming tom 😀
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From the mouth of babes! Awesome theme and debut post, Akshata! Shall watch out for your posts!
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Thx so much Mayuri, look forward to your feedback
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That’s a great idea to view the world. I liked your theme! Looking forward to more
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Thx so much Neha,eager to read your post as well
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Loved the idea and the babe talking to the reader. Already looking forward to the next chapter.
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Babe, I quite like that Lav!
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The challenge for Myra has began at the very day she arrives. I am keen to read about her life.
Perfect start to the story.
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Thanks so much Aesha look forward to your views
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Oh Mayra’s journey has just begun. You are off with a great start Aks. Back on your log after eons and looking forward to lapping up more of #AtoZChallenge posts.
https://natashamusing.com/2018/04/a-is-for-anachronism-misplaced-in-time-atozchallenge/
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So glad to hear from you. I wasn’t aware you are doing the challenge too. Heading over
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Last minute plan, Aks. Went back and forth a million times before I chose to take the plunge. :)))
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Ya I dint see your theme reveal . Glad you decided to take the plunge
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Missed out on the theme reveal date, as I was travelling. But did write a theme reveal post recently. Here it is: https://natashamusing.com/2018/03/a-to-z-challenge-2018-theme-reveal-april-anecdotes-atozchallenge/
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Oh ho! It starts the minute they are born, doesnt it? I love how you have written from the voice of the baby here.. Good start for Ato Z Akshata
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Thx Namy I always feel that I can write and connect to a piece more strongly when it’s in first person!
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This is such a brilliantly written post Aks, and I an eagerly waiting for the next day now. Lovely is too less to say… I am already in love with Myra’s sense of humor. She is my kinda person 😉
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So glad to hear this Dipika! Thx so much for the kind words
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Lovely start. Will be back to follow the story as it unfolds through Myra’s eyes! #A2ZChallenge
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So glad to hear this Neha! I can promise you there is lots of interesting stuff to come
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Lovely and different take on birth, Aks! Kids are burdened with parents’ thwarted ambitions/expectations even before they come in this world 🙂
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Thx so much Nupur. This is sadly just the beginning. So much more of sexism, judgement and bias that one has to face.
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That ending was a punch to the gut, Akshata. Loved it.
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Hey thanks so much Varad- not as dramatic as yours though 🙂
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Beautiful story. Waiting to read more about Myra and her story. Happy A to Z Akshata:)
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Thanks Deepa! Wish you loads of luck too
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Gosh. That was some way to begin the series.
Looking forward to the forthcoming posts.
Cheers,
CRD
Do drop by mine.
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Glad to hear that! will surely visit yours
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Hi Akshata! Firstly, Congratulations on your first #AtoZChallenge post. This made such a cute read…esp from the baby´s POV. Very well-spun and looking forward to read Myra´s journey.
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Thx so much Tina I am loving this challenge.look forward to reading your post soon
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Myra is learning lessons too soon of this world! Loving the flow in the post Akshata!
One spell error – Daddy mouth is spelled as moth.
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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Thx for pointing out that error will fix it!
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Beautiful !! I will surely be reading till Z.
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That ending-uff!
So nicely written-made me smile at many a place 🙂
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Thx a ton
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